{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36079904","dateCreated":"1300397055","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/36079904"},"dateDigested":1532252864,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Gone with the wind","description":"Dear Adri,
\nIn my opinion,the beginning of the introduction is too sudden,and I'd suggest you revise it a little bit.Also,I did not understand what you wanted to say in the sentence: "The reason for this rebellion was the fact that I was tired to hear things about it and to know that it had past the time test.".I suggest you rewrite some of the sentences so that the language to be more understandable and more literary.All in all,I love the subject you've chosen and I can see you really love this book.I'm really interested in reading more.Good luck!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36106612","body":"Thank you for your suggestions and I will take your advice in consideration.I glad you like this subject.","dateCreated":"1300439114","smartDate":"Mar 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"adrianaterei","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/adrianaterei","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36110894","body":"Sorry:"I am glad you like this subject!"","dateCreated":"1300451231","smartDate":"Mar 18, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"adrianaterei","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/adrianaterei","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}