{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35854032","dateCreated":"1300129626","smartDate":"Mar 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35854032"},"dateDigested":1532252903,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"feedback","description":"Dear Simi,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI knew that you would write an interesting introduction given your passion for the subject. It's always very helpful to write about something you like. It is also nice to see that you have started with a rhetorical question which is a great trick for catching the reader's attention. You caught mine at least :). However, I have one suggestion to make. In the last paragraph you have written &quot;how did she create&quot;, but I think it should be &quot;how she created&quot;, because it's not part of a question. But all in all, you did a wonderful job and I'm obviously looking forward to seeing what you will write next, so, good luck with your work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36320162","body":"hey mada:* thanks for your feedback, i will take in consideration your suggestion!take care:)","dateCreated":"1300814154","smartDate":"Mar 22, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"simina.sirb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simina.sirb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"35050664","dateCreated":"1298990683","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35050664"},"dateDigested":1532252903,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Simi dear,<br \/>\nFirst of all, this subject is perfect for you. I know how much you like Agatha's novels and I am sure that you will write an outstanding paper.Now, as you are a close friend I believe i can tell you straight on what I did not like:)))I really liked your introduction but there are 2 or 3 things that you might want to change. For example you repeat in 2 consecutive paragraphs that Agatha is a best selling author. You could either rephrase or mention this just once.Also, in the second paragraph i believe that instead of ''aroused in me the thirst'' something like ''aroused my thirst'' would sound better. And, finally, in the end ''go TO the library''.I really really can not wait to read more.Great great job Simi!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35441496","body":"dear Aniela,<br \/>\nI must sincerely give you thanks for your kind comment. your suggestions were great and absolutely imperative! also, thanks to your warning regarding the&quot;best selling atuthor&quot; repetition, I was able to correct another repetition that I made : i repeated the word &quot;popularity&quot;in two consecutive sentences!!!<br \/>\n thanks for your review and I really hope you will enjoy my entire research paper:)","dateCreated":"1299527753","smartDate":"Mar 7, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"simina.sirb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simina.sirb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36183222","body":"I changed the word &quot;notoriety&quot; because it has a negative connotation. If you are not ok with &quot;repute&quot;, you can use another synonym. <br \/>\nteach","dateCreated":"1300633205","smartDate":"Mar 20, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"cami7599","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cami7599","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36320338","body":"thank you teach, and yes, I am ok with repute:)","dateCreated":"1300814253","smartDate":"Mar 22, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"simina.sirb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simina.sirb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}