{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"38553152","dateCreated":"1304534889","smartDate":"May 4, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"dorin.r","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dorin.r","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/38553152"},"dateDigested":1532252911,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"table of contents.","description":"teacher, I will do my table of contents after I receive my revised chapters because I'm not sure it's good as it is now.I can manage also to number the pages so it will be done in a few minutes:)....
\nAnd I posted Cristina's work.She gave it to me today at school because she won't be able to send it.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"36080426","dateCreated":"1300397578","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/36080426"},"dateDigested":1532252911,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Hello there only guy,
\nI must admit,that I'm not quite sure what my opinion is after reading your introduction.It's a mix of confusion and excitement.I think that your introduction was maybe,the most original of all,but taking all in consideration,I'd suggest you focus more on the city,because you focused too much on your feelings and your opinion and not so much on the subject.I can't wait on reading more,and I have no idea what's gonna be next.Good luck!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36080516","body":"I know that my opinion might be a little bit contradictory,but I hope you understood what I wanted to say:*","dateCreated":"1300397641","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36080732","body":"And by the way,the quatation is brilliant!Don't ever consider changing it!","dateCreated":"1300397873","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36081336","body":"Iulia, the point of this introduction was to express our feelings, so i do not agree with you. Dorin still has 9-10 other pages to focus on the city. So, I believe i must say it again..well done!","dateCreated":"1300398470","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"35081506","dateCreated":"1299010660","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35081506"},"dateDigested":1532252911,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Birmingham-introduction","description":"Dorin,
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\nYou should know that I find your introduction really catchy and interesting. What I liked the most about it was that you emphasized very well the reason for writing on this subject and you also used a great range of vocabulary to go with your ideas.
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\nYou made me curious about the next chapters, so I can not wait to find out more about the city that caught your attention!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35761362","body":"Thank you!I hope you will like it as much as I do:)","dateCreated":"1299939671","smartDate":"Mar 12, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"dorin.r","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dorin.r","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"34985024","dateCreated":"1298913589","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/34985024"},"dateDigested":1532252911,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Dorin,
\nWoow, i really like your introduction. I liked the way you started it, i liked the fact that you did not reveal much about the city itself. Good job!
\nStill, i spotted some mistakes such as:
\nDid it ever happened-...happen
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\nsuddenly realize that you don\u2019t belong to this place-...that place(i believe it sound better)
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\npractice a large variety of activities-practise...
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\nAnd just from nowhere-out of nowhere.
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\nI can not wait to read more as you made the city seem so interesting.Keep on doing such a great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"34994220","body":"Aniela,
\nI am so glad you enjoyed my introduction...Thank you for your suggestions and I'll surely follow them (the corrections will be made when I will know how make them here).","dateCreated":"1298919813","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"dorin.r","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/dorin.r","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}