{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35858504","dateCreated":"1300133390","smartDate":"Mar 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35858504"},"dateDigested":1532252983,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Mass media -suggestions","description":"Dear Iulia,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI understand that you are very interested in the subject of mass media and I am glad that you have chosen to write about it, because it perfectly fits you. However, as a future journalist you should know that the information you write in your paper needs to be very well structured in order to have the impact that you wish for. So, I advise you to use more linking words and merge your paragraphs, because I think they are too many. Finding a connection between them should help you give your introduction a less puzzle-like appereance. I really hope I've given you some helpful suggestions. But there's one last thing I have to tell you...you should definitely keep the quotation from the beginning. It's very well chosen and gives your introduction an interesting touch. That's all for the moment. Keep up the good work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36079072","body":"Thank you Mada for your suggestions.I will definetly look up to it,and try to restructure it.good luck on your paperwork.","dateCreated":"1300396450","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36079098","body":"with*","dateCreated":"1300396463","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}