{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35054118","dateCreated":"1298992988","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35054118"},"dateDigested":1532253012,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Dear Alina, <br \/>\nThe book you have chosen is really interesting and as i read it a looong long time ago i hope that your paper will help me remember the plot and everything.<br \/>\nYour introduction is good, i liked especially your first paragraph.Still, there are some sentences that i could not understand, i believe that you forgot typing some words.For example:<br \/>\nHuman character is formed, he learns what is injustice-as human...?(i am not sure what you wanted to say)<br \/>\n<br \/>\nin a world that generally despises-a world that HE generally despises<br \/>\n<br \/>\nCaulfield into account the advice of others, but is still focused on his lifestyle chaotic, here consisting of all the drama of  Holden Caulfield- takes into account...chaotic lifestyle...in this consisting Holden's entire drama(maybe)<br \/>\n<br \/>\nhe's a very modern - i think that just ''modern man'' sounds better<br \/>\n<br \/>\nsimple aspiration- aspirations\/one simple aspiration<br \/>\n<br \/>\nFamily man, Holden Caulfield - i think that adding an article or maybe a gerund will make the sentence better.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nYour ideas are very good but you should pay more attention on how you express them!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35520124","body":"Dear Alina,<br \/>\nI must say that due to the fact that I also read the book a long time ago, I hope your paper will be able to remind me the plot, the characters and the message of the novel:) My suggestions for your introduction are mostly the ones that Aniela already wrote about. The single thing I want to add is that I consider you should focus more on expressing your feelings about the novel and tell us what determined you to choose this particular subject! <br \/>\n  I am sure that your main paper will be a very good one :) take care!","dateCreated":"1299620203","smartDate":"Mar 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"simina.sirb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simina.sirb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}