{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35519240","dateCreated":"1299619442","smartDate":"Mar 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"simina.sirb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simina.sirb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35519240"},"dateDigested":1532253036,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"potratrait of dorian grey-introduction","description":"Dear Ioana,<br \/>\nI was pleased to read your introduction and what I particularly enjoyed was the 4th paragraph; I really liked your comparison between Dorian Grey and those contemporaries of ours who are so preoccupied by their physical appearance. Still, there are some things you might want to change. First,as Aniela already suggested, I think you should rephrase the first paragraph in order to send a clear message to the reader. Then, in the third paragraph you should replace &quot;didn't denied&quot; with &quot;did not deny&quot;! Moreover, I think you should remove the word has from the phrase &quot;it has valuable&quot; in the ending of the third pargraph. Finally, in the last paragraph I believe you meant to say &quot;what people think about him&quot;, not &quot;what people thinks&quot;.<br \/>\nAll in all, good job Ioana! Can't wait to find out more about Oscar Wilde's novel!!:)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"34984126","dateCreated":"1298912702","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/34984126"},"dateDigested":1532253036,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Ioana, <br \/>\nThe subject you have chosen is really really interesting. Your introduction is good, i liked especially the last paragraphs. What i advise you to do is to rephrase the first one. I believe that the sentence is too long and hard to follow.<br \/>\nKeep on going!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}