{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36801218","dateCreated":"1301490980","smartDate":"Mar 30, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/36801218"},"dateDigested":1532253054,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Chapter 1","description":"Mada, I just love the topic you've chosed.You've done such a great job.I hope you won't forget to write about donald.He's my favourite.I thought that the spaces between the paragraphs are too big.You need to restructure it a little bit.But the content is wonderful.Well done!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36944220","body":"Thanks Iulia for your feedback! I will definitely write about Donald, don't worry :) As for those spaces between the paragraphs, well, I think this is how the paper should look with the settings given by our teacher. Anyway, I will adjust them if necessary. I appreciate your suggestion.","dateCreated":"1301655488","smartDate":"Apr 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"36589752","dateCreated":"1301157596","smartDate":"Mar 26, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Miha99","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Miha99","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/36589752"},"dateDigested":1532253054,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Disney Chapter One :)","description":"Dear Mada,
\nI really enjoyed reading your paper and you are definitely right about Disney cartoons. They are simply amazing and everybody enjoys watching them. I think your first chapter is very well written and I especially enjoyed the Mickey Mouse part. On November the 18th I\u2019ll be celebrating Mickey\u2019s birthday.
\nPlease tell me you will write about Goofy. He was my hero. :] Oh, and Pluto, and Donald and\u2026and everyone.
\nGood job! I can\u2019t wait to read more about Disney world.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"35379874","dateCreated":"1299439448","smartDate":"Mar 6, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/35379874"},"dateDigested":1532253054,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Lovely Mada,
\n I must say,I think you've done a great job.You told us exactly what we needed to know in the introduction.However,I must admit that I didn't quite like the end.I thought that it became a little bit too informal.But it's just my opinion.Well done!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35517138","body":"Dear Mada,
\nI was really happy to read your introduction about Disney world!! I consider that you structured the paragraphs in a good manner, and I really think that you managed to send your message to the reader. As far as Iulia's opinion about the end of the introduction I must say I don't agree!! Personally, the final paragraph actually made me smile:) Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!","dateCreated":"1299617620","smartDate":"Mar 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"simina.sirb","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simina.sirb","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"35860520","body":"Thank you girls for your honest opinion. I was a little insecure, too, about the last paragraph, but after all it seems that it depends how you look at it. I am waiting to read your suggestions for the next pages of my research paper(when they are done).","dateCreated":"1300135166","smartDate":"Mar 14, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"36800950","body":"Well,I've changed my mind about the ending.Everything's just great.Be careful with the spaces between the lines.","dateCreated":"1301490711","smartDate":"Mar 30, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"iulia16","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/iulia16","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"34981842","dateCreated":"1298911039","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/34981842"},"dateDigested":1532253054,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Mada,
\nI have to say, your introduction is just as interesting as the subject you have chosen. As far as what tabby said, i agree, an -ing form sounds better there.Also, in the fist paragraph i believe that we think about something FROM a different perspective.
\nAll in all, great job Mada. Your style is great, i can not wait to read more!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35078272","body":"Well, it's hard not to like something about Disney...:) Anyway, thank you for your advice, I appreciate your suggestion. I'll make some corrections.","dateCreated":"1299008262","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"34735196","dateCreated":"1298499498","smartDate":"Feb 23, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"tabby25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/tabby25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/34735196"},"dateDigested":1532253054,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Introduction-Disney","description":"Dear Mada,
\nI liked your introduction very much, especially the last three paragraphs. The conclusion rocks! :)
\nOne mention though:~ "stop a big smile to appear on my face" - I think it is "appearing on my face".
\nCan't wait to see what you write next!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"35076088","body":"Thanks for your feedback, Tabby. I'm really glad that you like my introduction and I think you're right about that 'ing' form. I'll change that. :)","dateCreated":"1299006730","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}