{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36945740","dateCreated":"1301659397","smartDate":"Apr 1, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Mada28","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Mada28","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/36945740"},"dateDigested":1532253251,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Chapter 1 ","description":"Hello, Miha! I really enjoyed reading your first chapter of the paper. You have such a natural style of writing! What I like the most is that you give information about the writer's life, but only that which is relevant to the book itself, so it fits very well in the chapter as a whole. I'm not sure what you will write next, because this part seems to cover a little bit of everything, so I am really curious to see what you will choose to reveal us in the next chapter. Keep up the good work! :)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"34979678","dateCreated":"1298910193","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"anielatoma","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/anielatoma","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/34979678"},"dateDigested":1532253251,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"introduction","description":"Dear Miha,<br \/>\nYour introduction is undoubtedly well written but I believe that you should focus more on explaining why this subject is important to you and why you believe that the rest of us should learn more about the book and its topic. I really like the first paragraph but then I get the feeling that you summarized the ideas which would be included in the main paper. Also, avoid abbreviations if you want your introduction to sound more formal.<br \/>\nI believe the book was fantastic so I can't wait to read what you write next about it!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36589146","body":"Thank you for your suggestions, although I posted my answer way too late.  After writing the first chapter I discovered that you were right and that I actually summarized the ideas of the whole paper. I will definitely change it and try making it more personal, explaining why this book has such an importance to me and why I have chosen this subject.<br \/>\nMeanwhile, I had my first chapter posted and I am not really sure if people are interested in reading about the writer\u2019s life. Also, I\u2019m not really sure about the last quote; it may look weird at the end of the chapter.<br \/>\nSo, thanks for your feedback and I really want to know your opinion about the next part.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nHugs ^","dateCreated":"1301155880","smartDate":"Mar 26, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Miha99","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Miha99","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"34733892","dateCreated":"1298498136","smartDate":"Feb 23, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"tabby25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/tabby25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/egb12e.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/34733892"},"dateDigested":1532253251,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"dracula introduction","description":"Dear Miha :)<br \/>\nI think you should start a new paragraph at the phrase \u201dVampires are frequently...\u201d. I think you meant to say \u201dneither alive nor dead\u201d instead of \u201ddeath\u201d in the third paragraph. I suggest you write at least one phrase or two for the last paragraph, it feels cut off. I really liked the quote from the beginning! <br \/>\nOverall, good work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"36589366","body":"Tabby,<br \/>\nThank you for your feedback. I also noticed that the last paragraph feels a little cut off, but I wasn\u2019t very sure of what to write at the end of my introduction. However, I may reconsider the last paragraph and try to explain a little more the purpose of this paper.<br \/>\nI hope you will read the first chapter and write your opinion because I am a little unsure of some aspects of it.<br \/>\nHugs :]","dateCreated":"1301156449","smartDate":"Mar 26, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Miha99","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Miha99","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}